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From sub-par suburbs come I.

I come to escape the endless cocoon of noises that encompasses my every waking moment. It is not a joyous chorus of the happiness of life, but rather, it is an ensemble cry for help from a slice of the slums that does not understand the delight of the peace that the world can bring.

And so, from sub-par suburbs come I.

To escape the plague, I must first traverse through it. It is a sorry sight for such tired, sleep-blurred eyes such as mine. I see nothing but a constant grey, a hovering stench of sadness and monotony. Even when sorrow is not the description of the day, it is the heartbeat that only barely beats, the only sound that can be heard above the droning of dull. It is an apathetic lethargy, a lagging drag that I need to escape, before I submit totally to the weary world around me.

The misery thins as I speed my way through the disease.

And then I hit it.

The doorway is non-existent, but I feel different, stepping through the invisible barrier that separates the magnificent from the mundane, the delectable from the dreary, the Heaven from the Hell.

Into this brand-new world I step, the colours suddenly vibrant, the air suddenly clean, the smoke and smog of the inner-city infestation finally cleared. It is a feast for every sense, and my senses feast upon all.

The bright mosaic of the pansies and marigolds that line the paths, and the pure, unhindered blue of a well-washed sky above.

The gentle heat of a warm, gleaming sun, and the soft, loving embrace of the wind, a friend happy to see me.

The fresh, crisp aroma of fields newly hewn in straight, organized lines, and the familiar salty tang of an ocean that one has touched before they have reached it.

The dark, bittersweet juice of the blackberries that line the paths beyond, and the warm, salty crunch of the walnuts that grow in the grove by the lawns.

The throaty arias of the loons that dance upon the lake, and the shrill, piercing songs of the cicadas, singing to announce the coming days of bliss.

The days of agony are behind me now, even if only for a spilt second in the history of time.

There is no pollution here; the air sparkles like a million diamonds have been embedded into the clouds.

I breathe deep, the very sun drenching every inch of my lungs. My new fortress, in warm shades of mahogany and miracles, looms over my ever-healing form.

I am home.

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This is a submission to :iconthe-writers-study:'s Summer's Gone contest. The contest states that we must write about something interesting we did over the summer, now that it's coming to a close. All the details be here at their journal: [link]

This lil' bit of prose describes my going to my beloved cottage in Lunenburg for a week. While that may not be the most extreme thing someone's done over the summer, it was glorious for me because I could feel the change in me and my world almost as soon as I got there. The grime of living around here, in, as I say, the sub-par suburbs, melted and it was replaced by this wonderful, peaceful, loving world that I could relax in. It was amazing, and so, I write about how it felt to break the border of boredom and enter this brand-new world of diamonds and love.

Comments and critiques are wonderful and muchly appreciated.

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~bookbrink Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I read this aloud in an old-timey narrator voice to my dad.
We both loved it.
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*HeadmistressMercedes Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, that is awesome! Well, when I write about my dearest, darling cottage, I get kind of nostalgic, so it only makes sense that it works when read like an old-timer :giggle:

I'm glad you both liked it! Thank yew, dearie! Here, have a cookie :cookie: And one for your dad, too! :cookie:
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~bookbrink Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yeah, we both liked it a lot! I'll be seriously surprised if you don't win that contest, and I'd like to say that I will not be competing. You intimidate me XD
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*HeadmistressMercedes Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I intimidate you?? More like the other way around!

And actually, I did win that contest ^.^ It was about the most amazing feeling ever :) I did an interview and everything! It's here, if you wanna read it: [link] ...in which I just realized I made a typo...ironic ^.^
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~bookbrink Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, duh! I read that interview! I just saw it again like ten minutes ago! I'm silly.
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*HeadmistressMercedes Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I thought you had! I vaguely remember you saying something about it on one of my journals, I think.

And yes, you are silly. Like me :aww:
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Mood: Delighted ~bookbrink Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*creepy voice* We're like twins.
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*HeadmistressMercedes Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
We are, dearie, we are...long-lost twins...indeed...
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~jaevynguyen Oct 2, 2012  Student General Artist
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*HeadmistressMercedes Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks hun! I'll look into it :)
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