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Elements Unending.

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There are no answers inscribed
in the books written by sand and storm.
No way to stop the thunder,
no way to quell its form.

But in the same manner I once called you “friend,”
I can now move on, and forget you all over again.
I cannot stop the flow of time, nor the elements from unleashing their desirable and disastrous ways. But I know how to say goodbye.

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GoldenNocturna's avatar
Powerful stuff. I like how you emphasized how easy it was for the narrator to cut ties with their former friend by comparing the act to natural disasters and time (unstoppable things).