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Rain.

Crystalline curtain.

Freshness ever-falling.

Dreams encased in diamonds.

Enchanting.  
:iconheadmistressmercedes:
The next entry in my poetry anthology, in form of a cinquain, about the rain, something I love dearly, but the Maritimes has had far too much of lately.

A cinquain is defined thusly: Poetry with five lines. Line 1 has one word (the title). Line 2 has two words that describe the title. Line 3 has three words that tell the action. Line 4 has four words that express the feeling, and line 5 has one word which recalls the title.

Comments and critiques are always welcome! Please share your thoughts, I does loves to hurr 'em!! :giggle:
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*HeadmistressMercedes Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank yew, dear ^.^
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~Winged-Wolfie-Chibi Sep 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
When it starts to rain outside, I like to go for a bike ride. I think everyone enjoys rain in different ways. Some like to fall to sleep to it, some love to watch it, I like to dance around in it.
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*HeadmistressMercedes Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, I always love to take walks in the rain! It's such good imagination fuel! I pretend I'm a lost explorer and I've stumbled upon a camp of runaways in the woods ^.^
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~Winged-Wolfie-Chibi Sep 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Exactly! And then I have my pet Pikachu toast some chickadees!
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*HeadmistressMercedes Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...stay away from me.

Always.

Never speak to me again.

Unless you come armed with an apology.
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~Winged-Wolfie-Chibi Sep 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
*evil laughter* NEVER!
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:iconheadmistressmercedes:
*HeadmistressMercedes Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Go fall in a pit and stay there.

Always.
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~Winged-Wolfie-Chibi Sep 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
No problem, I'll just have my Pidgy fly me out.
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