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I conjured this up one day in my brainbox, thinking it would make a cool short film or something. But, seeing as I am no film maker, I have to make due with this. A little something different from my usual fare.
He wasn't a superhero. Or a king. Or anyone, really. So how could a few simple words open the spring in her mind?
Be warned...there be some language that be strong.
Comments and critiques are always welcomed and appreciated. Tell me what you think! Especially given that this is not my usual fare, I really wanna know what you think of it ^.^
He wasn't a superhero. Or a king. Or anyone, really. So how could a few simple words open the spring in her mind?
Be warned...there be some language that be strong.
Comments and critiques are always welcomed and appreciated. Tell me what you think! Especially given that this is not my usual fare, I really wanna know what you think of it ^.^
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I absolutely loved this! It reminded me, when the girl is figuring out about what to write, of a story I've had on the back-burner for some time; a character starts in setting X, progresses to setting y, and writes the story they just wrote. This piece essentially fits that prompt and it was very well executed. It definitely read a little like a movie, and I could picture the scenery and the actions (and even which shots I might use if I were filming it) crystal clear. Great job! Just great!